Original scene sorry its in dutch only one i could find english version on netflix
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oa2QyItbwc0
My Cut of HIMYM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Fuiic6A3N4&feature=youtu.be
My Cut of Christinas 50/50 Scene
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9GpUEadg490&feature=youtu.be
For 50/50, see my note reply to Christina's blog. Otherwise this looks good. For HIMYM try to cut away for the extreme wide shot at the beginning sooner (space between them doesn't match there). Also try to cut down, or find a better take, for Breanna/Ted's reaction shot. That's kind of a weak moment.
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