For The Office, see my notes from earlier blogs. I have nothing to add otherwise.
For Breaking Bad, Erika's eyeliner doesn't match at the cut right before she gets up. Hopefully you can see this. Also, I think you should cut to a reverse angle of you/jesse for the line "thank god", otherwise this feels like a bit of a jump cut.
For The Office, see my notes from earlier blogs. I have nothing to add otherwise.
ReplyDeleteFor Breaking Bad, Erika's eyeliner doesn't match at the cut right before she gets up. Hopefully you can see this. Also, I think you should cut to a reverse angle of you/jesse for the line "thank god", otherwise this feels like a bit of a jump cut.