Zero to Hero: Nice cut! One of the things we discussed in class was the issue of sound mixing, which seems particularly pertinent with this piece since there are several forms of sound (dialogue, sound effects, and music). If you listen to your soundtrack the balance between these elements isn't quite right. Of course, we haven't formally covered sound editing/mixing yet, but these are things to start thinking about.
Fairly Legal: Take note of shot 7 in your edit. Her back is completely upstaging him. Why would we want to see her back? I would also question the 2-shot at the end, feels a little unnecessarily distancing. Otherwise solid work!
Zero to Hero: Nice cut! One of the things we discussed in class was the issue of sound mixing, which seems particularly pertinent with this piece since there are several forms of sound (dialogue, sound effects, and music). If you listen to your soundtrack the balance between these elements isn't quite right. Of course, we haven't formally covered sound editing/mixing yet, but these are things to start thinking about.
ReplyDeleteFairly Legal: Take note of shot 7 in your edit. Her back is completely upstaging him. Why would we want to see her back? I would also question the 2-shot at the end, feels a little unnecessarily distancing. Otherwise solid work!